Pitch & Feedback

This video is a one minute clip of a pitch of our early ideas for our music video to 'Drake-Headlines'.
We got both negative and positive feedback from classmates by doing this pitch.
Positive:
- The concept seems basic and easy to stick to.
- The use of generic conventions have been thought about well. e.g. Props such as caps and hoodies.
Negative/to improve on:
- We need a clearer concept on exactly what is going to happen throughout 3minutes 26seconds and to consider the time management.
- Locations are quite vague at the minute, the more locations we use the better.
- Make sure a crowd of people at a 'gig' looks realistic else it could look unprofessional.
- Ethnicity is key in Hip Hop as any white boy trying to look like he has swag may ruin the realistic look of the video. So characters need to be good actors or have some kind of realistic swag/gangsta look about them.
What we are going to do to improve the feedback we got:
- Think more about the concept of the video so that we have a clearer image in our head.
- Consider locations we are available to.
- Consider who the characters may be to make our music video look professional.